Prove me wrong and A-B test it against some good textual copy. Track actual conversions.
Use these guys as inspiration without stealing their design like those boneheads from a month or two ago: http://campfirenow.com
Regardless of the outcome, you win because now you have actual data to make a decision with.
For me to agree to sign up that your AB test wins, I'd have to proctor the test and at that point, you'd owe me for consulting services.
Prove me wrong and A-B test it against some good textual copy. Track actual conversions.
Use these guys as inspiration without stealing their design like those boneheads from a month or two ago: http://campfirenow.com